Thursday, March 18

The greatest story ever written: PART 2, MIRROR

I try not to stare at her, but those black eyes stare back at me.

what if she finds out??

hey you!

oh no, not now..


yes you! what are you hiding?

umm, nothing.

what a lousy liar! you do realize you can't hide anything from me.

wasn't trying to..

so, whats eating u tonight?

well, i was only thinking..

oh, keep those crazy voices out of your head! they never did you any good

you telling me this?? you must be crazy..

..and you are stupid. Aren't you still regretting the last time you listened to them?


but what? now u r stuck in your own golden cage

how dare you say that!! my husband won't like it.. he really cares.

yes he does.. he is only busy.

busy? stop lying to yourself.. all he cares about is his job, his jaugar and maybe his girlfriend..

enough! and leave me alone..

seriously, do you even love him?

none of your business..

sometimes i wonder, if you ever loved anyone of them?

yes i did, and still do..

waitamin.. you can't possibly love all four of them at the same time?

well, i have my reasons..

..and i have all the time in the world.

well.. if one showed me the truth, the second one taught me to love. The third one was fun to be with, and the fourth gave me stability.

yeah, the way i see it..the first one, asshole. the second, so full of shit. the third, boy toy. the fourth, credit card without limit.

stop it!... see, thats why i hate telling you stuff.

and yet you always come back to, whom do you love the most?

oh, its difficult for me to pick one

why ? are you afraid of the answer?

maybe.. i cant face the truth..

but honey, the truth has been staring at you...the whole time!

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Nikita Banerjee said...

Enjoyed reading this one!

Tongue-fu Lady said...

Thanks Nikita! :)

Little Girl Lost said...

ooh! ooh! i've been there!!! loving four (actually four!) at once. one was really cute, one was really smart, one was sort of intellectual, and one was my best friend. the mirror told me- 1.airhead boy-toy, 2. bit boring,too conventional,3.SO full of crap, 4. the one i am going to grow old with.
i listened to my mirror.
and how come u dont come see me anymore?

Tongue-fu Lady said...

hahaha.. I swear to you, didn't write about you at all :)
unlike you, the character is still confused..
But I am really glad u made your choice, Almond eyes ;)

devansh said...

phod diya..... i hope u dont get into such dilemmas...!
btw hoe many parts can i expect from this "greatest story"..?
and y r they so independent...?

Tongue-fu Lady said...

@D! : me? dilemmas..? hell no..
how many parts..?keep reading ;)
trying out a new style of writing..

Jack said...

T-f L,

Some conversation but could be reality too in today's world.

Take care

phatichar said...

Nice "Karma & Confessions" feel to it. Will dig into more here...attagirl!

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